英語(yǔ)作文錦集
High Salaries or Career Development? 高工資還是職業(yè)發(fā)展？
Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:
1)有的大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時(shí)主要看重高工資，而有的則認(rèn)為良好的職業(yè)發(fā)展空間才是更重要的
2)闡述他們各自的考慮
3)表明你的看法
High Salaries or Career Development?
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行文思路
本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點(diǎn)指出兩種不同的選擇，提綱第2點(diǎn)要求分別闡述這兩種選擇各自的理由，提綱第3點(diǎn)要求表明“我”的看法，由此可判斷本文應(yīng)為對(duì)比選擇型作文。
根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應(yīng)包含如下內(nèi)容：指出大學(xué)畢業(yè)生選擇工作時(shí)不同的側(cè)重點(diǎn)：注重高工資和注重職業(yè)發(fā)展空間;對(duì)比闡述他們各自的理由;表明“我”的傾向并說(shuō)明理由。
高分范文
High Salaries or Career Development?
There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
[2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later.
In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries.
【亮點(diǎn)點(diǎn)評(píng)】
[1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點(diǎn)或傾向。
[2]用于對(duì)比分析兩種觀點(diǎn)各自的理由。
[3]“with+賓語(yǔ)+賓補(bǔ)”的獨(dú)立結(jié)構(gòu)充當(dāng)狀語(yǔ)。
[4]“因?yàn)槿卞X(qián)”。
[5]強(qiáng)調(diào)句型，此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句子的主語(yǔ)。
[6]while引導(dǎo)比較狀語(yǔ)從句，意為“然而”。
[7]“一般來(lái)說(shuō)”。
[8]“選擇”。
佳句臨摹
1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities.
臨摹：近些年來(lái)，越來(lái)越多的人開(kāi)始喜歡洋快餐。
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2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible.
臨�。喝欢值诙N觀點(diǎn)的人認(rèn)為體育明星們?yōu)樯鐣?huì)做出了杰出的貢獻(xiàn)，因此應(yīng)該得到特殊待遇。
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3.佳句：Career may give us long
ng term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness.
臨摹：我們之間的共同之處使我們的關(guān)系牢固，而不同之處則都會(huì)我們?nèi)绾蜗嗷ダ斫狻?/p>
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【KEY】
1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food.
2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment.
3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other.
The Definition of “Price”價(jià)格的定義
The Definition of “Price” Prices determine how resources are to be used. They are also the means by which products and services that are in limited supply are rationed among buyers. The price system of the United States is a complex network composed of the prices of all the products bought and sold in the economy as well as those of a myriad of services, including labor, professional, transportation, and public-utility services. The interrelationships of all these prices make up the “system” of prices. The price of any particular product or service is linked to a broad, complicated system of prices in which everything seems to depend more or less upon everything else. If one were to ask a group of randomly selected inpiduals to define “price”, many would reply that price is an amount of money paid by the buyer to the seller of a product or service or, in other words that price is the money values of a product or service as agreed upon in a market transaction. This definition is, of course, valid as far as it goes. For a complete understanding of a price in any particular transaction, much more than the amount of money involved must be known. Both the buyer and the seller should be familiar with not only the money amount, but with the amount and quality of the product or service to be exchanged, the time and place at which the exchange will take place and payment will be made, the form of money to be used, the credit terms and discounts that apply to the transaction, guarantees on the product or service, delivery terms, return privileges, and other factors. In other words, both buyer and seller should be fully aware of all the factors that comprise the total “package” being exchanged for the asked-for amount of money in order that they may evaluate a given price.
Woman in Modern Society 現(xiàn)代社會(huì)中的女性
Women play an important part in modern society. Now many women are going into professions, such as medicine, law and engineering. They comprise a large part of the workers in businesses and factories. In addition, they are working up to important positions which used to be held mainly by men. There are even some businesses which are run completely be women. Clearly, women are making outstanding contributions to the progress of modern society.
There are, However, still some people who assert that men are superior to women in many ways. First, many jobs men do can hardly be done by women, who are physically not strong enough. Second, most of the world-famous scientists and statesmen are found to be males. Finally, the whole society seems to have always been dominated by men only. In their opinion, men should enjoy more rights than women do.
Personally, I'm firmly standing on the side of those woman right defenders. Since both men and women are equally important in human activities, they should be on an equal footing.
提高英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的動(dòng)機(jī)
許多中國(guó)人花了很多時(shí)間在這個(gè)看到就頭疼的英語(yǔ)上，只為了考試，成績(jī)卻常常一塌糊涂。如果只有外來(lái)的壓力，學(xué)習(xí)效果就不會(huì)好到哪兒去。源自?xún)?nèi)心的動(dòng)力是必需的。
Improving Your Motivation for Learning English
Remember there is a lot that you don’t know
You are good, but your English probably isn’t perfect. You probably can’t understand English language TV, read books in English, talk to native speakers easily, write letters without mistakes, etc.
Even if you are the best student in your class, always try to find your weak areas and work on them. When you’ve learned to speak English well, your problems will be quite small: punctuation, rarely used grammar structures, rare words, understanding “street language”. Right now, your problems are probably more basic: mistakes in pronunciation, small vocabulary, grammar problems with the present perfect tense and conditional structures.
Use your English whenever you can
The more you use English, the more you will want to learn it. Because English is so popular, you can use it everywhere.① You can use Google to find English?language websites with interesting information, you can watch American cartoons, you can play adventure games on your computer, you can read interesting books in English, or you can do other things that we write about.②
If you do these things, you will not only have fun and learn English. If you see that a new English word lets you understand your favorite TV show (or communicate with people, or beat a computer game), you will want to learn more words. So you will learn English more, use it more, learn it more, use it more... If you also use effective learning methods, your English will grow faster than you can imagine.
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行文點(diǎn)評(píng)
文中的小標(biāo)題自然地將文章分為兩部分，分別是作者針對(duì)提高英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的動(dòng)機(jī)所提出的兩點(diǎn)建議。在每一部分中又各自分成兩段，第一段說(shuō)明建議的合理性，第二段說(shuō)明這樣做的好處，結(jié)構(gòu)非常清晰。
文章避繁就簡(jiǎn)，用詞簡(jiǎn)單明了，句式多用短句構(gòu)成結(jié)構(gòu)并不復(fù)雜的長(zhǎng)句，既通俗易懂又增強(qiáng)可讀性，排比句的使用也為文章增色不少。
好文妙譯
提高英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的動(dòng)機(jī)
記住你還有很多不懂的東西
你現(xiàn)在很不錯(cuò)，但是你的英語(yǔ)很有可能達(dá)不到非常出色的程度。你很可能還聽(tīng)不懂英語(yǔ)電視節(jié)目，讀不懂英語(yǔ)書(shū)，不能很容易地與以英語(yǔ)為母語(yǔ)的人談話(huà)，不能沒(méi)有絲毫錯(cuò)誤地寫(xiě)英文信，等等。
即使你是班里最好的學(xué)生，也要經(jīng)常努力去發(fā)現(xiàn)你的弱勢(shì)并且多下功夫。當(dāng)你的英語(yǔ)已經(jīng)說(shuō)的相當(dāng)好時(shí)，你的問(wèn)題就小多了：標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)，很少被使用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，不常見(jiàn)的單詞，理解“街道語(yǔ)言”。現(xiàn)在，你的問(wèn)題很可能就更基礎(chǔ)性了：發(fā)音上的錯(cuò)誤，詞匯量小，現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和條件結(jié)構(gòu)從句的語(yǔ)法問(wèn)題。
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